Where out wonders, where the heart tends to seed,
Close to your home thou shall never bleed,
Disposable combustion able, not to plead,
Questioning days, hours, while empty shells breed,
Unforgiven, thou will never be,
The hopeless shall rot in empty nothingness with all lost indeed.
Close to your home thou shall never bleed,
Disposable combustion able, not to plead,
Questioning days, hours, while empty shells breed,
Unforgiven, thou will never be,
The hopeless shall rot in empty nothingness with all lost indeed.
4 comments:
Questioning days, hours, while empty shells breed
The hopeless shall rot in empty nothingness with all lost indeed.
You got me in those 2 lines here..
Loved it!
I write poetry too.. check "relinquish" to see them..
Do you write more?
hey,
thanks for the comment,
i occasionally write poetry from time to time, i'll check your blog, sorry for the late reply,
Peace,
its cool..
it happens all the time n' u get caught up with life =)
interested in much much more..
Peace.
Hello my friend!!!!! jajaja
I love that castle, I wanna go again there, someone.... who knows you and me.... (u know who) jajajaja, told me when u took that picture, it's SIMPLY GREAT!!!!!!!!
About the poem, I think I need more time to understand what is saying...
See u!!!!!!!!!
:->
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